Chap01 – p25

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« They taste the same as the ones you cooked for me as a kid »
« They taste the same as those you used to cook for me as a kid »

Without knowing the backstory, I’d suggest « kid » might be out of character – « child » would be more likely to be used by someone used to having a butler select their clothes.

« That’s the same old recipe » is a little awkward, but I’m not sure what to suggest – « same old » usually suggests something that still hasn’t been improved. Possibly « Can’t beat [the/my] old recipe »

I can’t believe I used « kid » !! @__@ Thanks for pointing this one out and for your help on the previous pages 🙂

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